Reflection
This topic was harder than I expected. It was a very general proposal, so finding meat for paragraphs was difficult. I had to learn how to expand my mind and dig deeper into the argument. The proposal of better campus food hours hits home for a lot of students, including myself. Exploring that argument was very interesting. The process of gathering information opened my eyes as well. I was able to learn how to structure a proposal argument without accidentally changing over to another type of argument. This does not feel like one of my stronger papers, not only based on content but technically as well. I used numbers such as operating hours and university costs to add a logos appeal. There are different avenues I could have addressed in this paper such as how other universities are addressing this same issue as well as any statement the university has already made on why the hours are the way they are. However not my strongest, I still believe this paper was persuasive and addresses an issue and proposes a plan of action to fix it. The proposed plan was to create longer and better food hours to better accommodate students.
This topic was harder than I expected. It was a very general proposal, so finding meat for paragraphs was difficult. I had to learn how to expand my mind and dig deeper into the argument. The proposal of better campus food hours hits home for a lot of students, including myself. Exploring that argument was very interesting. The process of gathering information opened my eyes as well. I was able to learn how to structure a proposal argument without accidentally changing over to another type of argument. This does not feel like one of my stronger papers, not only based on content but technically as well. I used numbers such as operating hours and university costs to add a logos appeal. There are different avenues I could have addressed in this paper such as how other universities are addressing this same issue as well as any statement the university has already made on why the hours are the way they are. However not my strongest, I still believe this paper was persuasive and addresses an issue and proposes a plan of action to fix it. The proposed plan was to create longer and better food hours to better accommodate students.